Tutor Feedback:
My Pitch presentation went extremely well, reinforced by the feedback shown above. The extensive information displayed throughout my script has assisted me with complementing a successful presentation that covered every significant and insignificant aspect of my final product. My tutors were quick to point out the effective nature of my proposal document, discussing how its elongated approach made it appear more like a treatment than a proposal. The first miner form of constructive feedback had fallen under the suggestion of not fixating on specific scenes or shots that might slow down the production of my film (a problem that has plagued previous briefs.) With such a determined and ambitious idea, I must follow up on crucial factors I had pointed out; like the booking of specific props that will assist the set-dressing of my location, booking of the various art rooms upstairs that I have a discussed, the evaluation of Wes Anderson and other key directorial inspiration, and finally, how I may go about tying the Surrealist painter artists that have shown significant contributions to both the Surrealist and Dada world of art.